Monday, May 18, 2015

100WC #33

But the ferocious wind ...

It was noon. All the children in Mrs R class all were eager to go out for a game.But Mrs s said maybe Later the wind is picking up and it is getting really strong . But the ferocious wind didn't stop them! They disobeyed her and went straight outside and didn't come back until. Mrs R could her screaming HELP US! cried the children. As the Help got quieter and quieter Mrs R got more and more scared bye not knowing where they were so she dashed to go look but there were no children in site.

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  2. I like how you've used the word 'dashed' Chloe! Some great words here. Remember to get a partner to edit to check it makes complete sense. :)

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